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Beyond Two Souls
Lost and Drifting intime
The captain gives me the hourglass a turn
It’s been months that the ship has wandered waves;
Each dip is followed by a swelling rise
Each day becomes another journal page
“Another day lost at sea” is how the book tends to flow.
The crew dreams at night, the distant memories to flow.
They’re brought back to a better time
A lover’s kiss or a golden page
Their heads filled with absolute no remorse
But once the morning lights rise
Theri joy is beneath the rush of the waves
Such was my life without you. But your love brought waves
Of joy and that sent sorrows onto the mix
Out and away, I let my aspirations rise from yours
And cherished each sweet second of time
we had together. This was our turn
To be happy. Your love was the pen and my heart was the page
And so the ink dripped and blotted the journals crimping page
The crew cried” Land ahead” and beyond the silenting hush of the shores
The sight of golden shore made each eye’s sparkle to grow brighter
Skyward, upwards, they shone
Brighter than the graceful gates of heaven
Ahead the sound of free seagulls soaring rise
Now home for years, each day he would rise
And look anew one of his journal’s lats unfinished page
Only a dreary memory of hopeless time
Nothing more, nothing less
time would definitely take its toll
But no one is so forsaken that their fortune cannot turn
And so I bless the day we met, for it makes the turn
Of my sadness to joy. My spirits rise
With passions that flow
From my heart onto this page.
You rescued me from being pulled about miersy’s waves
May our love that save me outlast even time
In life’s great book, we turn together each golden poage.
Side by side, we rise above the mountains; together we dive beneath the waves.
Our ship may flow from where it will but my heart will be forever yours for all of time.
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This is a sestina poem, inspired by a love letter that I read in a book. I chose to do this style of poetry called a Sestina poem which is a type of poetry consisting of six stanzas of six lines. The end words of the first stanza are repeated in a different order as end words in each of the subsequent five stanzas. I chose this type of poetry because it spoke to me and followed the theme of my poem the way I wanted it to. It was also the easiest for me to get the point across which I was trying to make by doing this style.
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Arzoo,
This is a really great poem! Good job on doing the sestina, I have tried to write one and failed miserably. The only thing I would change would be some minor spelling mistakes, along with GUMPS.
Cammie <3
Dear Camdyn,
Thank you for taking the time to read my piece. Choosing to do a sestina poem was definitely difficult at first but once you start writing and get a good flow, it does become easier. You should definitely give it a shot and don’t be afraid to try and make mistakes. You’ll only get better with making mistakes 😉 . Anyway, I’m glad you liked my poem and like always, I’ll make sure to check my work for GUMPS. I do tend to overlook my work and don’t notice the errors but thank you again for your leaving your kind thoughts.
Sincerely,
Arzoo